Talk:ISES2009 Poster Abstract: Exposure of Finnish subpopulations to fine particles due domestic wood combustion
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Comments on the abstract
Some food for thought:
- The very main findings could be brought up a bit more
- increase in exposure according to level of education
- young adults highest exposed
- shows also in the exposure categorization
- Methods could also be described a bit more briefly if more space for other text is needed
- Some more consideration on the possible explanations behind the findings would be interesting
- Also consideration on the meaning of the observed difference would be interesting
- what is the effect of a 0,10 µg/m3 difference (max-min educational level groups) on average exposure to wood combustion PM2.5?
- Not sure if PM2.5 (NOTE: PM, not PPM) needs to be explained in this context (→ if space is tight, leave out the explanation)
Some language hints:
- due to something
- exposure to something
- check the use of plurals