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| − | ====About the focus====
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| − | Focus: "Total number of trips travelled per hour in the Helsinki Metropolitan Area"
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| − | :{{Attack| The focus is ambiguous. It should be mentioned that the trips are only composite trips, not all. Rewording is needed.}}
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| − | :{{Defend| Focus should be short and easily understandable. Details about the essence of the variable should be in the scope, not in the focus.}}
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| − | ::{{Attack| This alternative is almost as short, so the argument does not hold: "Total number of composite trips travelled per hour in the Helsinki Metropolitan Area".}}
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